Pitch Feedback

Our pitch feedback allowed us to realise the main errors that were found in our ideas for our film and it's title sequence. This was done as the problems that stood out the most were highlighted by peers within our class. For example we chose to include a knife and a house within our film however when looking at the feedback it is now clear that the knife is unexplained as to how our main character has got a knife and the house we wanted to be shown within the title sequence leaves people wondering as to who's house it is and how it relates to the film. After reviewing these issues we have concluded to remove the use of a knife as we believe that they are right in highlighting the fact that we have no explanation for where it has come from and in regards to the house, to include explanations as to whose house it is if we choose to use it within our title sequence. From this feedback we will be able to look at where we have made mistakes and how we can make improvements for our film.

Here is the pitching to our film, for this we had to look at the questions and be able to relate them to the film we were making. This was so we could follow the conventions to ensure we were following the correct genre of psychological.