Second Shoot Editing

This is our second edited version and we feel the editing runs a bit smoother now, one problem we have discussed is that on the shot in which our character sees the hand by the tree, the pan we use leaves too much of a widespread gap within our footage and doesn't seem realistic to what we are trying to achieve. We thought we could change this by having a closer recording of the character's face and her shock when she sees the hand. Also, timing is an important aspect to consider as we have already used roughly 30 seconds of footage.